Tuesday, 8 June 2010

0930 - 1600

monosyllabic rain
by
your window
slips
distraction
in
your day
as
you travel
back
to 1993
when
(suspire)
being Morrison
or
anything
like him
earned you
a
blend
of
disapproval and
criticism
and
false hopes
from
the taller
stronger
father
bereft of
a memorable riff
or
harmony
followed by
cold
dinner

8 comment(s):

fishbowl said...

this is just amazing!!! Just what I love about this monosyllabic rain that pulls out the words...write more often Ro.

pree said...

Remember when.

Good stuff :)

Saumya Baijal said...

Great work. Write more often please.

blinded blue teddy said...

wow.

thecharmingfreak said...

Born in '93.

I like the way you write. Period.

Mirage said...

Ok this is seriously cool stuff!

P said...

Very different and interesting!

CARL LUND THINK'S YOU ARE BRILLIANT! said...

I love it man!